Beside
the map, a dog-eared copy of Madagascar
rested on the writing desk. Defoe? Bah! No doubt she filled her head with
romantic ideas of gauzy silks, exotic spices and pirates who wooed
adventure with the tip of a blade. The reality of Andovia was somewhat
different, however, and he, who’d lived its basest aspects, had no stomach to
inform her. Enduring her delight as she ate pastries and tea would be
preferable to this discussion.
“Knowledge is by nature a chancy repast,” he
warned. “Sometimes full of sweet revelations. More often fraught with
disenchantment.”
Grey
eyes held his gaze, steady and clear. “And yet, it’s what I hunger for.”
Leo and Anne have such a turbulent journey ahead of them. It's nice to come back to this point early in the story when the adventure was new and the skies limitless.
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~Kate~
I like the strong imagery you bring into this passage.
ReplyDeleteThank you, William :)
DeleteGreat snippet. I love the way it introduces us to the characters.
ReplyDeleteThanks, PT. A brief glimpse into 2 willful souls :)
DeleteI love the tone of the snippet and the way he's thinking one thing but says another, less harsh. Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. Leo tries, but doesn't always succeed, to be a gentleman ;)
Deletereally love that last line, well done !
ReplyDeleteThank you, E.E. :)
Delete"Grey eyes held his gaze, steady and clear. 'And yet, it’s what I hunger for.'"
ReplyDeleteGreat line.
Well written snippet.
Thanks, Frank! :)
DeleteThis is richly written, from the descriptions to his scorn to her determination.
ReplyDeleteI'm already hooked! :)
Love!!! Great first snippet! Looking forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds exciting. They seem to be drastically different and still he has a sort of acceptance of her that makes the relationship mysterious.
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