My post is again from my romantic steampunk series Tin Heart. In this passage Lady Anne describes the predicament she is in concerning the her future.
Blessed
with glossy dark curls, Queen Victoria’s eligible granddaughters were
fashionably plump whereas Anne, with hair so fair it appeared almost white,
could not have been more opposite. She silently cursed her small breasts and
thin frame, which had kept her safely on the outskirts of the marriage market,
but now appeared to be the winning favour in the Duke’s eye.
If rumors were true, Cleone didn’t stand for
conventional tastes. He liked women in his bed who were not merely slender, but
childlike. Disturbing, but what did Anne know about Andovian men, least of all
their conjugal practices? She had never
met one in person, thank heavens, and gossip about the Madagascan island enemy
could hardly be solid fact.
She
knew only one truth for certain: The Andovians had murdered her parents in a despicable
act of cowardice that had nearly destroyed her. She would rather marry a pocket
watch than the Duke de Cleone.
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I hope you enjoyed this snippet.
Please check out the Snippet Sunday Facebook page to see what other authors have been working on.
***Mark your calendars!***
Ever wonder what makes dirigibles fly?
On November 4th am honoured to be visiting the Coffee Time Romance Steampunk blog to discuss Air Ship Adventures! Stop by and learn about lighter-than-air travel and what it was like when giant Zeppelins dominated the skies.
AND... I will also make an exciting announcement concerning Tin Heart! *squee*
Thanks for stopping by.
~Kate
The last portion makes the whole excerpt work just right!
ReplyDeleteThank you William :) Lady Anne might have a happier marriage if she *does* marry a pocket watch, lol. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteI sense a little prejudice here, but it's beautifully written (and somewhat logical) prejudice!
ReplyDeleteAnd if she's a reliable narrator, that pocketwatch would look pretty good to me, too. :D
Thanks Sarah. She doesn't know it yet, but her impending forced marriage is the least of Lady Anne's troubles. Thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteEven skinny girls aren't happy with their bodies. Good snippet, Kate. :)
ReplyDeletelol, Siobhan. Is anyone truly happy with how they look? Lady Anne thought she was safely plain and not in high regard. However, greater plans are afoot, which make her appearance the least of her concerns. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteInteresting snippet, Kate. So much info in a few sentences. Well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet! He creeps me out.
ReplyDeleteIt seems that he will have to work really hard to get her. Good start!
ReplyDeleteGreat work Kate .Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThe last paragraph is the strongest... Nice snippet!
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