Captain Leonidas...
“Tell me how you feel the story is progressing,” I prompt,
picking a chocolate biscuit off a plate and taking a nibble. “We’ve gotten
quite a bit past that momentous tea scene now.” (for more on that see An Interview Of A Different Kind )
He watches the movement and remains silent, wisps of steam
gently curling from the crested piping on his helmet. I see that as a sign of
displeasure. Of course, it is rude of me to eat in front of him, knowing that his
lack of a digestive system means he cannot do the same. Out of respect, I put
the biscuit back but the curls of steam continue.
“You have hurt Lady Anne,” he accuses, his voice a mixture
of rich echoes as it reverberates inside his metal body. “And given me no
choice but to do the same.”
“All is fair in love, war and story writing.” I say with a
smile. “I’m glad you’ve fallen in love with her. She needs a man like you.”
“I am not a true man.”
“Because you’re stuck in a metal suit? I think Lady Anne sees you quite differently. Especially after you engaged with her in la fete noir. She gave herself to you quite selflessly.”
“It was a mistake. A decision made in the heat of battle. It
will not happen again.”
“Do you really think so?” I cannot help laughing. “She has a
say in the matter too, you know, and I believe she quite enjoyed the moment. As
did you.”
He stares at me, steam hissing from his piping. “Give me my
old body back.”
“Do you think it will make a difference to how she feels
about you if you have a flesh and blood body instead of this metal one?”
“It makes a difference to me!”
He leans forward, gripping
the table so hard the edge snaps beneath his steel fingers. Steam swirls around
us in a hot mist which quickly cools as it settles on my skin. I abandon my
drink, pushing the cup aside to face him squarely.
“I like you, Leo. You have a wonderful, strong soul. I see
why Anne is drawn to you, despite your self-loathing problem. But you have a
lot of growing to do before you deserve your happy ending. Show me that you
know what it means to be a true hero, and I will consider giving you your old
body back. Until then, I suggest you enjoy the adventure and take out your
frustration on that nasty dreadnought.”
I imagine the scent of brimstone is heavy in the air as he angrily
stands up and storms from the coffee shop, crested helmet hissing steam and red
cape snapping behind him.
He’s a troubled soul, Leonidas. So dark and brooding and fun
to write. I have every confidence that he will redeem himself in the course of
the story. But I think as a writer I can’t make it easy. Life isn’t easy. Neither
is writing a book. Each chapter is an adventure, a new lesson learned. And just
like Leo, I must be patient, accept my literary shortcomings and learn from them before
I can write, ‘the end’.
What about you? Are there books you’ve written or read where
you feel you've learned something about yourself by the time you've reached the end of the story?
Thanks for stopping by!
~Kate
Nicely done! Poor Leo. He is truly troubled. I'm so glad he has you to help him find his HEA. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, I have found a couple of my novels...therapeutic to write. Maybe that's why I feel so damn crazy at the moment...I haven't been writing.
Hmmmm. Thanks for the fun post!
Leo does have a ways to go, but you'll help him get there. I find troubled souls very compelling.
ReplyDeleteYes, I found some very deep truths I wasn't consciously aware of while writing my first two novels. It came as quite the surprise.
Great post, btw!